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There's never a kiss
That would ever go amiss
Foundation o' bliss
©2008-2009 =Aldarune
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Submitted: November 15, 2008
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Just a little poem that came to me while trying to sleep.

I'm not sure about the category which I put it in though.
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That's very lovely! :) It made me smile, it's so short and simple but says a lot.

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I'm glad you like it and that it made you smile :aww:

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Aw, it's lovely dear! :heart:

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Thanks a lot, dear, it means a lot to me :aww:

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:hug: :heart:

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Mici :)

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Short and sweet; I like it a lot. Not much to critique, but it made me chuckle and left an impression - I will probably remember this brief poem for days!
Thanks for reading it :aww: I'm glad you like it.

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