There's never a kiss
That would ever go amiss
Foundation o' bliss
There's never a kiss That would ever go amiss Foundation o' bliss |
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CommentsThat's very lovely!
-- I've switched accounts! Go to ~MurderSprinkles I'm glad you like it and that it made you smile
-- The dreams and wishes of today are the deformed realities of tomorrow. Current avatar by =madfairy7. Go pester her to get one Aw, it's lovely dear!
-- Hello world! I love you. Thanks a lot, dear, it means a lot to me
-- The dreams and wishes of today are the deformed realities of tomorrow. Current avatar by =madfairy7. Go pester her to get one -- Hello world! I love you. Choumi 8D
Mici
-- The dreams and wishes of today are the deformed realities of tomorrow. Current avatar by =madfairy7. Go pester her to get one Short and sweet; I like it a lot. Not much to critique, but it made me chuckle and left an impression - I will probably remember this brief poem for days!
Thanks for reading it
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